Project Grade 7 English Language Arts

The Chalkmoor Irrigation Ordinance: A Grade 7 Position Paper

Students take an assigned stakeholder role, write a position paper to a fictional irrigation district board, and answer two counterclaims with a named response move.

Objectives

  1. Students will state a claim and support it with evidence cited by source.
  2. Students will answer a counterclaim using a stated move of concede, qualify, or refute.
  3. Students will name the evidence that would change their own position.

Vocabulary

Drip irrigation
Watering plants through tubes that release water slowly, drop by drop, right at the roots. Very little water is wasted along the way.

Also: claim, counterclaim, rebuttal, concede, qualify, allotment

Teacher overview

The Chalkmoor Irrigation District is a fictional agency in a dry valley, and its board is weighing an ordinance that would require larger farms to replace flood furrows with drip lines. Over five sessions students argue an assigned role in writing and then in a three-minute statement at a mock hearing, and the paper they turn in must answer two counterclaims with a move they name out loud. That naming is the point of the project. Students often state an opposing view and then ignore it, writing "some people say X, but I think Y," which restates rather than answers. Requiring the words "concede," "qualify," or "refute" forces the writer to decide what they are actually doing with the objection.

Rubric

Criterion 4 Exceeds 3 Meets 2 Approaching 1 Beginning
Claim and role The claim is precise, stays in the role's voice, and holds steady from the first paragraph through the hearing A clear claim about Ordinance 12 appears in the first paragraph and matches the assigned role The claim is vague, or it drifts from the role partway through No clear claim, or the paper argues a role that was not assigned
Use of evidence Five or six cards are cited with purpose, and the paper says what each card can and cannot prove At least four cards are cited by number inside the sentences that use them Fewer than four cards are cited, or a card is cited without being used Evidence is invented, or the cards are listed rather than used
Counterclaim work Both objections are stated as their holder would state them, and both named moves are carried out convincingly Two counterclaims appear, each with a named move that is then carried out One counterclaim, or a named move that is announced and not carried out Objections are dismissed, ignored, or misstated
Register and delivery Formal throughout, and the spoken statement fits three minutes without cutting the counterclaim work Formal address to the board, no second person, statement within three minutes Slips into casual wording, or the statement runs long enough to lose its ending Written to a friend rather than a board, or no statement delivered

Differentiation

Support

Give these students three evidence cards rather than six, chosen to include one that cuts against their role, and reduce the paper to 400 to 500 words with one counterclaim. Provide a paragraph skeleton whose middle section is already labeled "state the objection," "name my move," and "carry it out." Rehearse the spoken statement once with a partner before the hearing.

Extension

Ask these students to write a second short paper from the role whose objection they found hardest to answer, then to write a paragraph naming which of their original arguments survived the switch. A second option is to draft the amendment to Ordinance 12 that would win their vote, in the plain language of a real motion, and to say which card supports each change.

ELL supports

Pre-teach "allotment," "furrow," "drip irrigation," "ordinance," and "board" with a labeled drawing of a field watered two ways. Provide the frames "Card ___ shows that ___," "I concede that ___, and yet ___," "I qualify this by saying ___," and "I refute this because ___." Allow the spoken statement to be read from a full script rather than note cards, and let students rehearse it with a partner before the hearing.

Extensions

Have students find how their own state or county decides who may take water from a river, using a state agency page, and write a paragraph comparing that process with the Chalkmoor board's. Students who cannot find a clear answer should write the paragraph naming the agency they would call.