Project Grade 6 English Language Arts

A Shift at the Fenwith Water Plant: A Grade 6 Narrative Project

Students research one water-sector role, then write a 600- to 800-word narrative of a single shift at a fictional treatment plant with an accurate job-facts sidebar.

Objectives

  1. Students will write a narrative of one work shift using a consistent point of view.
  2. Students will build a story around three accurate details drawn from supplied job sources.
  3. Students will describe at least two education paths into the role they wrote about.

Vocabulary

Key words: narrative, point of view, shift, operator, license, sequence

Teacher overview

The driving question for this project is what a day of work actually looks like for the people who make tap water safe to drink. Students choose one of five roles at a fictional treatment plant, gather job details from supplied role cards, and write a narrative of a single shift, which the class binds into a collection called "Twenty-Four Hours at Fenwith." Each narrative is turned in with a short factual sidebar about the job. The teaching note to make early is that sixth graders tend to write career narratives in which nothing goes wrong, which leaves the reader with a description of duties rather than a scene, so the brief requires one problem the worker notices and solves.

Rubric

Criterion 4 Exceeds 3 Meets 2 Approaching 1 Beginning
Narrative technique Point of view holds throughout, the sequence is clear without effort, and dialogue and detail both do work Point of view holds throughout and the shift's events run in a clear order Point of view slips once or twice, or the order of events is hard to follow Point of view shifts repeatedly, and the events read as a list
Problem and resolution The problem grows out of the job itself, and the worker's response uses knowledge the role cards describe The worker notices one problem and does something about it A problem appears but is solved by luck or by someone offstage No problem appears, or nothing follows from it
Accuracy of job details Four or more accurate details are woven in so naturally that none reads as inserted At least three accurate details from the role card appear in the narrative Two details appear, or one detail contradicts the role card Fewer than two details, or the work described is not this job
Sidebar and sourcing Sidebar names three or more paths with the license requirement stated correctly, and every number is quoted exactly with its source Sidebar names two paths, uses only fact card numbers, and lists sources Sidebar names one path, or a number appears without a source No sidebar, or numbers appear that came from nowhere in the packet

Differentiation

Support

Give these students a timeline template with the first two events already written for their chosen role, and reduce the length target to 400 to 500 words. Provide a point-of-view bookmark showing the pronouns that belong to first person and to third person, to be checked at the end of each paragraph. Allow the sidebar to be completed as a labeled form rather than written prose.

Extension

Ask these students to write a second short scene showing the same problem from another worker's point of view, then two sentences on what the reader learns from the second view that the first could not show. A second option is to write the shift log the worker would have filled out, and to explain in three sentences what the log leaves out that the narrative keeps.

ELL supports

Pre-teach "shift," "sample," "valve," "log," and "license" with photographs or simple drawings and a matching card set. Provide the role cards with the key verb in each duty underlined. Allow the timeline in Milestone 2 to be drawn as a comic strip before it is written, and offer the sentence frames "At the start of the shift," "By the middle of the shift," and "Before going home" to scaffold the sequence.

Extensions

Invite a worker from a local utility to answer five questions the class prepares in advance, or have students find a public job posting for one of these roles and compare its listed requirements with what their sidebar claims. Students then write one paragraph naming anything the posting required that the role card did not mention.